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a piece of a redo

verticals in the forest wink and play with matches; may or may not care if a neighbor is in nightly retirement and as many are metal as wood, but all are quite alive; some just dressed, made up to appear … Continue reading

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screwing with another redo

Oh it’s a buzz of activity and a ball a house of hornets reside in and the only way to handle it is to attend the hornet reorientation retreat where wiring is all taught by hands-on protective demo so the … Continue reading

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a redo for no particular reason

We will now have midday repast and a servant will become for a while not completely nude and in feet bare shall hasten her steps that shall make her simple cloth dance on her shy dash to the garden and … Continue reading

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touching up one I almost like

Bulldozer operator does offer he who’d gone and found shade and dreamed until sweat seeped to thicken where the straw sun visor also napped, so the bulldozer digs out not dirt solely but scrapes the nerves of he who dozed … Continue reading

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redo of an oldie born from the sea

If I don’t come out of this, if I go under where one should not swim and swallow black salt and thighs clamp and I cannot breathe, unable to scream that she is not young, limber, ripe, sweet, but bitch … Continue reading

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exercising:2

the slippers are of a ballerina but the dancer never attended that school but the way the toes wiggle in them, toes in the ballerina slippers, nullifies that credential lack, and the tiptoe twirl sends ripples that turn to waves … Continue reading

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another redo

back to the dude on the futon in the sanity section’s whitewashed pads – padding is speculated – so he rubs temple walls and a throat which breath is burry dribbles wearily – in an era long bygone weariness would … Continue reading

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another edit

we see in this era language for these peoples ascended a fresh evolutionary wave which when crashed would become… hm? The statement prior. A specific would be appreciated. Oh that statement. It is. It is abstract. Produce a figure we … Continue reading

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Seaside Institute Adventures (a meanwhile)

Outside the building where men discussed plans for the Seaside Institute, or rather outside the floor on which the room they sat in, all around a very beautiful table, well, way down on the street, a few words were strolling … Continue reading

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Revisiting the Seaside Institute Adventures (more)

About then some rumbles began to roll around in the sky, these rumbles were thunderous for they were from the adjacent county which was famous for thunder, people spoke thunderously even when happy, and so the county’s thunders sometimes snuck … Continue reading

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