sketchy redo of an unfinished sketchy redo ramble (just trying to get back to the river or the spring)

The experience proved
as all experiences
prove, nothing can escape
relational influence.
They all end up in one reel
or another. Of course there is always
the one that emerges and seeks
to sell its performance
proving the exception.

This is the place the reader
is asked to consider the sphere
afloat in a space most clear.
Relative to the ordinary
dimensions of the land
which gelatinous membrane
they’d used their conical
craft to penetrate, the sphere’s
proportions made it small enough

to sail practically
undetected; its admiral
could say go to one clover,
like they had technology
able to isolate
a single clover of all
the clovers, and to float over
to that clover, just to be
with it, gain audience

to its lightened grains, which the sphere
did, or the pilots caused the sphere
to veer the way the admiral
said, over there to that clover,
surprised, at the clover here that resembled
their clovers back on their
primary sphere. So they
drifted closer to see and they saw
windows in the millions.


About Timmy the Scribbler

Love to write all kinds of stuff I love writing so many different kinds of stuff it is a constant struggle to narrow the focus to a manageable handful and let the others go. But a few years ago I dipped my fingers into a poetry pie and of all my uncertainties, one thing that is no uncertainty is that it is one passion that must remain, so maybe that's the one. I do dearly delight in chopping up fictional works into stanzas and syllables.
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